P 156 cause and effect writing
Intro to Academic Writing(2) Wed 7,8
200902149 Yu Hyelee
To provide a successful tutoring
No one can deny that tutoring is the most popular and favorite part time job among university students. The earning is pretty high than any other part time jobs and one can get money at the first time. Besides, by teaching student one can also study a lot so it's very beneficial. As tutoring is very popular, it's not only hard to find student but also keep doing it. To keep tutoring then what is needed?
The most important and basic thing is preparation. Some ignores this especially when they teach young students like elementary or middle school students. However, at any moment they can be in real trouble and so was I. When I first started my English private lesson, I thought the textbook is too easy and didn't prepare anything. Though, there was an English word that I saw for the first time in my life. I broke into a cold sweat and my student looked at me strangely. And then she asked me the meaning but I couldn't answer it.
The second one is pretending undaunted. Sometimes student can solve the problem or take word quiz much sooner than I expected. In that case, it's important to not panic. Just act as if you already knew he or she will finish it soon. Then some idea will be come up you're your head and naturally class will be flow. Besides, this could make tutor seems reliable.
Tutoring is not only a lucrative part time job but a very worthwhile job and I have taught four students in recent two years. While I do tutoring, I experienced many difficulties and could make my know-how. I believe that these two are critical in keep maintaining tutoring job.
From Noh Young Sun to Yu Hye lee
ReplyDelete1. What I like about this essay is that the writer gives out very practical advice about tutoring. I think it could be very useful for college students out there who have no experience of teaching kids.
2. This essay is about two tips on how to become a successful tutor.
3 .I like this sentence, “Besides, by teaching student one can also study a lot so it's very beneficial.”, because I this is definitely true. This sentence reminded me of an old saying that goes “ Best teachers are also enthusiastic learners.
4.Everything’s clear
5. The essay is so well written that I ‘ve got nothing to point out;; But one change I would make If I were you is that I would restate the two points in the final paragraph using different language instead of just writing “ these two points “ in the last sentence of the conclusion paragraph.
1. What I like about this essay is the topic. your choice is quite interesting that I enjoyed reading your writing.
ReplyDelete2. This essay is about how to be a successful tutor.
3. I like this sentence; The most important and basic thing is preparation
because since this is most basic, it might be easily forgotten to be done by tutors. You evoke its importance.
4. This sentence is not clear to me; Then some idea will be come up you're your head and naturally class will be flow
5. I think if you develop more each paragraph by adding some detail, your writing would be better.
1.what i like about this essay is the topic and the writing's contents. because both of them are based on writer's experience.
ReplyDelete2.This essay seem to talk about success in tutoring
3.Tutoring is not only a lucrative part time job but a very worthwhile job and I have taught four students in recent two years because it's based on his/her vivid experience.
4.none
5.I think if you add more difficulties in tutoting your writing will be more rich.
P 145 cause and effect writing 2nd Writing
ReplyDeleteIntro to Academic Writing(2) Wed 7,8
200902149 Yu Hyelee
To provide a successful tutoring
It’s a fair fact that tutoring is the most popular and favorite part time job among university students. The earning is pretty high than any other part time jobs and one can get money at the first time. Besides, by teaching student one can also study a lot so it's very beneficial. As tutoring is very popular, it's not only hard to find students but also keep doing it. To keep tutoring what do we need?
The most important and basic thing is the preparation. Some ignores this especially when they teach young students like elementary or middle school students. However, at any moment they can be in real trouble and so was I. When I first started my English private lesson, I thought the textbook is too easy so I didn't prepare anything. Though, there was an English word that I saw for the first time in my life. I broke into a cold sweat and my student looked at me strangely. And then she asked me the meaning but I couldn't answer it.
The second one is pretending undaunted. Sometimes student can solve the problem or take some word quiz much sooner than I expected. In that case, it's important to not panic. Just act as if you already that he or she will finish it soon. Then some idea will come up in your head and naturally class will flow. Besides, this could make tutor seems more reliable.
Tutoring is not only a lucrative but a very worthwhile job. I felt it by teaching four students in recent two years. While I do tutoring, I experienced many difficulties and could make my know-how. I believe that these two are critical in maintaining a tutoring job.