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P145. 200902732 LEE JI SUK/wed78 What kinds of success do you desire most? There are many kinds of success, and lots of people do success in their own field around the world. Among all kinds of success, I think that success in relationship with others is the most important. People cannot live alone, and they always long for good relationship with others. There are some secrets why some people have good relationship with others around them.
To success in relationship with others, one should become a good listener when other people say. People always want to receive attention from others and they will really appreciate the person who gives special attention to them. Listening attentively is very simple. Just concentrate on speaking person and react to him or her by facial expression and gesture. Asking some questions on the topic they are talking is also good. People will be happy and they will come to like you if they feel that you respect them by listening their words attentively.
Showing kindness to others around you is second secret. All human beings want to receive good treatment because It can make them feel like they're special. By satisfying their hunger for this, you can build good relationship with them. Laughing a lot when people say something funny and praising a lot about their merits and calling them first are things that you can do easily in real life. By doing these simple things, you can get their attention and favor. Many people long for success in relationships with others, and this can be attained by simple things like listening attentively and showing kindness to others. If you want to have good relationships with people around you, just follow these secrets! |
Sunday, November 28, 2010
P145. 200902732 LEE JI SUK
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5. The paragraph was organized well. There were some words and expressions that I liked. However, I think the writer should give more interesting examples to the body paragraphs.
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ReplyDelete2.Yor main point seems to be being success in relationship with other people
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