The Greatest Thing In My Life.
For me, the most great thing in my life is taking
After taking twice SAT, I realized the test gave me not only pain, but also the greatest thing, gain. I understood what 'no pains on gains' meant from my heart. And also knew there's no free lunch. Someone are buzzing about SAT's hard competition. But I think we can be real adult through this test. It can be our coming of age ceremony. So I chose Koera SAT as the greatest thing in my life.
To Kim Si Eun. From Lee Su Jin. Assignment week2
ReplyDelete1. What I like about this piece of writing is changing of your thinking for taking Korea SAT. I felt sympathy because I also took it.
2. Your main point seems to be a lesson by taking Korea SAT twice. Maybe the words 'no pains no gains' makes the topic of this paragraph clear.
3. These particular wordls or lines struck me as powerful.
words or lines
Through this test, all students can't avoid being stood in line by their test results.
-I like this because it arouse my sympathy well.
And also knew there's no free lunch.
-I like this because it words is unfamiliar to me, but it makes me understand the topic well.
4. Some things aren’t clear to me. These lines or parts could be improved.
lines or parts
So I had to study one more year.
-Need improving because writing more sentences like 'so, I couldn't concentrate on my study well.' will make the context smoothly.
5. I think that this paragraph is good, so I don't know what change is needed.