Andong Steamed chicken
Maybe you have any food that you can't be sick of that food. In my case, Steamed chicken is that food. I like it very much, and I usually eat it. And my mother also know my favorite food, so when I go to my home, mom always prepares steamed chicken for me. When I was a high school student, friends and I usually sent out for it at school. And one day, I ate it for two consecutive days. Like this, I like steamed chicken so much.
I didn't eat various steamed chickens. But from among those what I ate, I think that Andong Steamed chicken is the best. When I ate it, I can feel various tastes. The sauce is salty, sweet and juicy. And tteok and cellophane are chewy. Moreover vegetables of steamed chicken are very fragrant. The sight of it is very big and tempting, and the smell is very sweet. So, it always stimulate my appetite. Also, I feel warm with a good grace because it is hot. Especially, the sauce tastes good. When you eat rice with the sauce, maybe it will be more delicious.
I like chicken, so I have eaten many foods of chicken. For example, fried chicken, smoked chicken and samgyetang etc. But I think that Steamed chicken is number one from those foods. And Andong Steamed chicken is the best of some steamed chickens. I can't be sick of it.
To Lee Su Jin From Kim Ju Yeon Assignment week 5
ReplyDelete1. What I like about this piece of writing is that, the writier is found of steamed chicken just like I do. I also like steamed chicken dish, and don't get sick of eating it!
2. Your main point seems to be that among all kinds of chicken dishes you love steamed chicken dish best. Particularly as you pointed out, you like Andong steamed chicken most.
3. I liked the way you described the taste of sauce as 'salty, sweet and juicy'. Due to this descriptive explanation of the sauce, my mouth became watery!
4. X
5. In my opinion, if you add a litte more description about how you became to like steamed chicken,the whole essay would be better. It would become much more descriptive and interesting to read.
To Lee Su Jin From Kim Kyung Un Assignment week 5
ReplyDelete1. What I like about this piece of writing is that I can see how much the writer loves chicken as she mentions her memories related to it.
2. Your main point is that your favorite food is steamed chicken, especially "Andong Steamed chicken."
3. These particular words or lines struck me as powerful-"And one day, I ate it for two consecutive days." This sentence made me feel that the writer loves eating steamed chicken so much.
4. none.
5. In my opinion, the last paragraph would be better if it was mentioned after the topic sentence in the first paragraph. Instead, you could have finished the essay by rapping up, how much this food reminds me of my personal experiences and how long you can go forever explaining the lovable taste and smell of it.
To Lee Su Jin From Kim Si Eun
ReplyDelete1. What I like about this piece of writing is that it's comfortable to read
2.Your main point is that you love steamed chickens. yout topic is prety easy to read
3.These particular words or lines struck me as powerful are 'I didn't eat various steamed chickens. But from among those what I ate, I think that Andong Steamed chicken is the best' This line show yur strong will to choose chickens
4.I think there's nothing
5.If you write more reason why you like it, i thik, it will be more logical writing.