Peer Feedback Sheet
To_Lee Jisuk___________________ From _Jitendra Kumar Gupta______________________ Assignment -2010-09-08___________
1. What I like about this piece of writing is your gratitude towards your native language._________________________________________________
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2. Your main point seems to be __cleared._________________________________________________________
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3. These particular words or lines struck me as powerful:
Words or lines I like them because
designed scientifically. This language is really designed scientifically. One can read, write and speak very easily in comparison to other languages.___________________ _____________________________
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4. Some things aren't clear to me. These lines or parts could be improved (meaning not clear, supporting points missing, order seems mixed up, writing not lively):
Lines or parts Need improving because
Greatest language in the world. Korean script_____________________________ ______________________________
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- The one change you could make that would make the biggest improvement in this piece of writing is I would like to rename the title of this writing. It should be like "Hangul –the fastest growing language in the world.__
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From Evergreen, 8th Ed./Houghton-Miffflin
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