Being a morning person
I think that being a morning person is great. But to tell the truth, I am not a morning person. I am more a night person than a morning person. I usually go to bed late, and I like sleeping late in the morning. But nowadays I wake up early than usual. Because in the early morning, I have a gathering with my friends to study. It is hard to wake up early than usual. Every morning, I think many times that I want to sleep just more 5 minutes. Like this, to overcome a temptation of sleeping is hard. But using more times of morning is very effective and good. I don't need to prepare for a class in a dash, skip breakfast and miss a bus. Besides, I can take more works than usual. Although I am a little tired, I feel a sense of satisfaction for having a day hard and being healthy. By this opportunity, I am trying to be a morning person not a night person.
To Lee Su Jin From Kim Ju Yeon Week 2
ReplyDelete1. What I like about this piece of writing is that you've wrote advantages of being a morning person. I do agree that we can use time more effectively when we wake up a litt bit earlier than usual. Moreover, it was interesting that you feel the same as I do when trying to wake up early; wishing I could sleep just 5 more minutes !
2. Your main points seem to me that even though it's hard to be a morning person, when you put your effort to become a morning person, it's much better than being a night person. Like you said, if we wake up early, we could use time more effectively and have a feeling of satisfaction for starting the day early.
3. What struck me most powerful was your sentence, "to overcome a temptation of sleeping is hard". I totally agree. Nothing is harder than getting rid of the temptation of sleeping; even in the test weeks I can't stay wake up without a cup of coffee!
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5. I think if you correct simple grammar errors, for instance '5 more minutes' and 'Because of this advantages (not 'By this opportunity'), it would be a much better piece of writing.
1. What I like about this piece of writing is an experience of being a morning person.
ReplyDelete2. Your main point seems to be how great being a morning person is.
3.” But to tell the truth, I am not a morning person. I am more a night person than a morning person.” struck me as interesting. I like it because it wonders me what your writing is going about.
4. “Every morning, I think many times that I want to sleep just more 5 minutes.” seems order mixed up. I think it would be better to write “Every morning, I have wished to sleep just more 5 minutes several times.”
5. The one change you could make that would make the biggest improvement in this piece of writing is some grammatical mistake.
To Lee Sujin From Yu Hyelee
ReplyDeleteAssignmnet-2010-09-13
1. What I like about this piece of writing is the things you can do when you wake up early in the morning. You wrote it very precisely so it's easy to understand and I also can sympathize with you.
2. Your main point seems to be your determination to be a morning person even it's very hard.
3. "Although I am a little tired, I feel a sense of satisfaction for having a day hard and being healthy." struck me as interesting becaue I can feel your mind about being a morning person.
4. Somethings aren't clear to me. "By this opportunity, I am trying to be a morning person not a night person." Because I can't know what this opportunity is.
5. The one change you could make that would make the biggest improvement in this piece of writing is the unity. Because you said that you're a night person but you said nowadays you wake up early and again you said there's many temptation so it's hard to wake up. Of course I can understand what you intend to write but I think it would be much great if you touch it up a bit.