200902732 LEE JISUK
Hangeul
The word 'Hangeul' means 'The greatest language in the world'. and I think it's exactly right. I always have been thinking that the greatest thing is our alphabet, Hangeul. Day by day, more and more foreign countries are recognizing the superiority of Hangeul and even some tribes decided to accept Hangeul as their official language.Hanguel is designed very scientifically and almost all sounds can be written in Hangeul using just twenty four letters. I have been learning English and Italian, and their pronunciation often changes depending on situations. For the foreigners, it's sometimes very confusing. But unlike other languages, Hangeul always have same pronunciation, so It's easier to learn. For these reasons, I'm really pround of Hangeul and I'm sure that it's the greatest language in the world.
Peer Feedback Sheet
ReplyDeleteTo- Lee Jisuk From -Jitendra Kumar Gupta Assignment – 2010-09-08
1. What I like about this piece of writing is your gratitude towards your native language.
2. Your main point seems to be cleared.
3. These particular words or lines struck me as powerful:
Words or lines - designed scientifically.
I like them because this language is really designed scientifically. One can read, write and speak very easily in comparison to other languages.
4. Some things aren’t clear to me. These lines or parts could be improved (meaning not clear, supporting points missing, order seems mixed up, and writing not lively):
Lines or parts - the greatest language in the world.
Need improving because this is not true in my view. So, write “Korean Script instead.
5. The one change you could make that would make the biggest improvement in this piece of writing is - I would like to rename the title of this writing. It should be like “Hangul –the fastest growing language in the world.
From Evergreen, 8th Ed./Houghton-Miffflin
To- Lee Jisuk from Kim si eun
ReplyDelete1. what i like in your writing is i also think korean is the greatest things
2.your main point is easy to find
3.what i like in your writing is
The word 'Hangeul' means 'The greatest language in the world'. and I think it's exactly right
because i absolutly agree with your opinion!
4.something aren't clear is your logics. you only said Hangeul is great thing but the reason is little short i think you'd better write the specific reason why it is scientific word or sth
5. I think it's great if you give some examples