Primo Bacio Baci, my favorite local hangout
Since I was young, I have been crazy about pasta especially cream sauce pasta. I am so into finding fancy Italian restaurants through the internet blog postings and people regard me as an explorer. I spend several hours looking up the internet postings about the nice restaurants and whenever I hang out with my friends, I suggest them to go the places I discovered on the internet.
My favorite local hang out Italian restaurant is 'Primo Bacio Baci' which is at Hongdae, Seoul. The restaurant is so famous that people have to stand in a line at least 2 hours. Most of the people visiting there get past named 'Pane' which is the most well-known cuisine of the restaurant. Its noodles are put into bread shaped like a bowl so that people can snack off it. When I pick up the pasta noodles with my fork, I can smell its rich melted cheese flavor and also can see gooey cheese. Not just its attractive figure, what makes me hook on is its gourmet flavor. Once I have some, I can feel its sweet and caramelized fresh vegetables and seafood that is mingled with creamy cream sauce. It is never greasy at all. Its scrumptious taste makes lose my control of eating. At least this moment, I cannot think about gaining weight or that I am on a diet now.
For me, it seems like looking for terrific Italian restaurant is destiny. I feel lucky that I found a wonderful Italian restaurant like Primo Bacio Baci. Without any doubt, the restaurant will be my favorite Italian restaurant in my whole life.
1. What I like about this piece of writing is your olfactory and taste descriptions.
ReplyDelete2. Your main point seems to be your favorite food, pastas of Primo Bacio Baci.
3. These particular words or lines struck me as powerful: I can feel its sweet and caramelized fresh vegetables and seafood that is mingled with creamy cream sauce
I can smell its rich melted cheese flavor and also can see gooey cheese
I like these sentences because I was able to imagine what the food was like and I got to have water in my mouth.
4. Some things aren’t clear to me. These lines or parts could be improved: Most of the people visiting there get past named 'Pane'
-> Most of the customers choose the pasta named 'Pane'.
5. The one change you could make that would make the biggest improvement in this piece of writing is your introduction; if it becomes more related to 'your pasta' or close to general idea about food, not 'your interest on looking for good foods', it should be better writing to let us better concerntrate on your main idea.
To Hwang Seonyoung From Yu Hyelee(200902149 ELI)
ReplyDeleteAssignment-2010-09-23
1. What I like about this piece of writing is the description you wrote about the pasta of your favorite rstaurant ‘Primo Bacio baci’. Your description is pretty vivid so it’s like I’m watching right in front of it. Besides after reading all your description of pasta, I really became hungry and wanted to taste that pasta.
2. Your main point seems to be your love of the Primo bacio baci’s pasta.
3. ‘Once I have some, I can feel its sweet and caramelized fresh vegetables and seafood that is mingled with creamy cream sauce’ struck me strongly because it makes me really feeling it.
4. Some things aren’t clear to me; “For me, it seems like looking for terrific Italian restaurant is destiny.” Because it seems a little bit irrelevant for me while reading.
5. The one change you could make that would make the biggest improvement in this piece of writing is the first paragraph. This introduction gives information that your favorite food is cream sauce pasta. However, actually your favorite food is cream pasta from Primo bacio baci. So, it would be much better that if you add more information about your favorite restaurant.
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ReplyDeletePrimo Bacio Baci, my favorite local hangout
ReplyDeleteSince I was young, I have been crazy about pasta especially cream sauce pasta. I am so into finding fancy Italian restaurants through the internet blog postings and I found a stupendous restaurant named ‘Primo Bacio Baci’, now one of the biggest attractions at Hongdae.
My favorite local hang out Italian restaurant ‘Primo Bacio Baci’, which is located in Hongdae, is always full of customers. The restaurant is so famous that people have to stand in a line at least 2 hours. Most of the people would like to have pasta named ‘Pane’ which is the most well-known dish of the restaurant. Its noodles are put into bread shaped like a bowl so that people can snack off it. When I pick up the pasta noodles with my fork, I can smell its rich melted cheese flavor and also can see gooey cheese. Not just its attractive figure, what makes me hook on is its gourmet flavor. Once I have some, I can feel its sweet and caramelized fresh vegetables and seafood that is mingled with creamy cream sauce. It is never greasy at all. Its scrumptious taste makes lose my control of eating. At least this moment, I cannot think about gaining weight or that I am on a diet now.
I feel lucky that I found a wonderful Italian restaurant like Primo Bacio Baci. Without any doubt, the restaurant will be my favorite Italian restaurant in my whole life.