Since there are too many words to upload my rewritten writing on the comment below the original one, I post it here.
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Wonderful Teacher
Before I start my writing, I would like to ask you a question: what did you want to become when your childhood? If you are a girl, I am sure that most of you once dreamt of being a teacher at least for some period. I was also one of you. As I was the person who kept this dream for much long time compared to any of you-until my high school, more exactly just before getting my SAT result which discouraged me to come true such my long-lasting dream-, the word 'teacher' seems to mean more special to me than others. I met, as did others, many teachers from kindergarten to university by now, and I had different images from each of them. Since I had been dreaming of being teacher, I very often tried to observe them very carefully and 'analyze' their attitudes for myself who fully believed in being in the future a good teacher. So, now, let me talk about how a wonderful teacher is according to myself.
First of all, I think that a wonderful teacher has to be an utterly double-faced person. One face is the one as a good friend for his or her students and the other as a strict teacher. It could be slightly changed depending on students' grade, but a teacher usually faces various situations and students with different personality. They therefore need to manage these things differently. For example, one of my teachers in my high school was completely double-faced; he would pin the student's ears back for students' misdeed while he was usually very kind and considerate to us. One day, there was a quite serious argument between two students in my class of high school. The teacher punished them pretty ruthlessly by making them hold their hands up for several hours. After their punishment, he called them to explain them very kindly what had been wrong. After this event, there was no problem any more in my class, and those students never hated him, but on the contrary, they admired him more than before as a good teacher. It was always same to others. Secondly, it is necessary to keep young so that teachers come to understand students who are in a different generation from them. It is said that big consideration of students and effort to listen to students, both of them are required most to be a good teacher. These are based on understanding about their different attitudes and ways of thinking. Teachers, therefore, have to try find reasons which get their students in trouble with their disciplines and solve those problems to the students' level of thinking. This fact is proven by a research about best teachers in which some Korean students had participated and which was released out a couple of years ago; most of them confirmed that a teacher who tried to listen carefully to them and seemed younger than their real age was their best teacher. And, here is another example: several years ago, I came upon a TV program which was saying about the most popular teacher of a middle school; according to his school students, we would watch popular TV soap drama series, listen to Korean pop music, both which were now very popular among adolescents. And, in the video, the teacher, who was in the mid forties like some parents of his students, was even wearing the school uniform as all students were. For his uniform wearing, students felt closer with him than other teachers, and got to become open to him. In class, he did his lessons having been prepared to his students' level, for example, using names of actual popular young stars in order to explain things more easily to them. In a result, there were some students who got improved exam grade compared to their previous one.
There is a saying in Korea: education is our future. That means that to give our children good education is to have brighter society in the future for they would do their best to get better their country. This good education is in a part from school, that is, from teachers. They therefore do very important roles in society both in the present and in the future. For this reason, teachers need to be conscious of such importance of their career and do their best to teach their students. And, others including students have to have more respect on them. If these two things work well simultaneously, each individual and the society will be happy.