200900547 Kim Si Eun

p,93 first draft/great inventions

200900547 Kim Si Eun

Internet newspaper

Every morning, I felt fresh feeling whenever I watched well folded news. I had no idea when it was delivered, but maybe my dad would take it for every morning. I couldn't understand all of the story but I tried to read all of things. After entering the middle school, even though I didn't have enough time to read it, but in order to feel fresh, i usually started my morning with newspaper. when I was in high school, using internet became parts of our life. As technology had changed fast, the news also had changed its form by using internet. And right now, internet newspaper has became new parts of my life.

I think Internet news paper are one of the greatest inventions for several resaons. As a result of internet newspaper, people can receive news as it happen. We don't have to wait for its publishment anymore. Whenever and wherever with internet, we can read newspaper. And moreover internet newspaper help to form public opinions easily. We can't quickly respond to article in traditional newspaper. If we had wanted it, we would have had to write letters for reader's column, But we don't need to do that right now. We can only write comments right below the articles. By commenting, we could share our thinking and see what others think about it and also make issue. As a result, one article could be more rich in contents by mixing with lots of people's thinking. We could see various type of newspaper from progressive newspaper to conservative newspaper at once and for free. By accessing each newspaper's brand, we could compare each newspaper's different tone.

Of course ,internet newspaper also has weak points . We can't see it where internet doesn't get on access. And some comments written by readers have possibility to distribute false informations or wirte malicious comments. In spite of those things, including me, lots of people enjoy reading internet newspaper and commenting I think if reader more focus on weak points and try to improve it, nothing can replace newspaper.