200903875 Seonyoung Blair Hwang
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Traditional Korean Wedding Ceremony
If you have a chance to have a look at traditional Korean wedding ceremony, I believe you would admire and might want to have a wedding like that at least once in your whole life. There are so many marvelous things to enjoy at the ceremony such as colorful Korean wedding dress, and spectacular banquets.
As you see Korean traditional wedding dress called Hanbok, you may want to possess it for yourself. The clothing is made of delicate shiny silk with various colors of red, blue, green, white. It is beautiful enough and worth to have. Its vivid and fine colors make the bride more gorgeous like an angel from heaven. In addition, a headpiece of bride embroidered with colorful threads makes people enchanted. There is also a banquet after the wedding. It cannot be missed because there are so many cheerful activities such as sharing chestnuts and throwing chestnuts into bride's pockets at the banquet. In the stupendous and festive party, the couples share the chestnuts without using their hands, just using their mouth. It is fantastic, and has so much fun and makes it more delightful. Elder people throw the chestnuts into the bride's pockets. It is a way of praying fecundity and people tell the couple's fortune of giving a birth by the amounts of the chestnuts she got.
Wedding would be one of the most important, the happiest, and the biggest ceremonies in people's lives. In this perspective, the fancy dress with splendid colors and wonderful banquets would enhance the wedding more magnificent, excellent, and pleasant.
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ReplyDeleteTo - Seonyoung Blair Hwang From - Jitendra Kumar Gupta Assignment – 2010- 09-29 (Wed 7-8)
1. What I like about this piece of writing is you describe Korean wedding ceremony very minutely.
2. Your main point seems to be cleared to some extent.
3. These particular words or lines struck me as powerful:
Words or lines -its vivid and fine colors make the bride more gorgeous like an angel from heaven
I like them because- - It’s a fact. I have watched Korean wedding ceremony in various Korean dramas and in movies.
4. Some things aren’t clear to me. These lines or parts could be improved (meaning not clear, supporting points missing, order seems mixed up, and writing not lively): none
5. The one change you could make that would make the biggest improvement in this piece of writing is that you should describe how a wedding ceremony starts and how it ends. You just describe dresses of the bride and various kinds of activities which is followed after wedding ceremony. So, add some more specific details at this point.
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ReplyDeleteIf you have a chance to have a look at traditional Korean wedding ceremony, I believe you would admire and might want to have a wedding like that at least once in your whole life. There are so many marvelous things to enjoy at the ceremony such as colorful Korean wedding dress, and spectacular banquets.
When the wedding ceremony starts with an ambient music, the couple shows up with wearing Korean traditional wedding dress called Hanbok. It is so beautiful that you may want to possess it for yourself. The clothing is made of delicate shiny silk with various colors of red, blue, green, white. It is beautiful enough and worth to have. Its vivid and fine colors make the bride more gorgeous like an angel from heaven. In addition, a headpiece of bride embroidered with colorful and fancy threads makes people enchanted. There is also a banquet called pyebaek right after the wedding. It cannot be missed because there are so many cheerful activities such as sharing chestnuts and throwing chestnuts into bride’s pockets at the banquet. The couple shares the chestnuts without using their hands, just by using their mouth. It often looks so embarrassing that people trying not to touch each other’s lips by not using their hands. It has so much fun and makes the party more festive and delightful. Elder people throw the chestnuts into the bride’s pockets. It is a way of praying fecundity and people tell the couple’s fortune of giving a birth by the amounts of the chestnuts she got.
Wedding would be one of the most important, the happiest, and the biggest ceremonies in people’s lives. In this perspective, the stupendous dress with splendid colors and wonderful banquets would enhance the wedding more magnificent, excellent, and pleasant.