pg76. A formative experience
200902149 Yu Hyelee
When I was a little girl, I could say that I was absolutely self-centered person. I loved myself too much so I used to call my self as third point of view, such as "Hyelee is hungry." or "Hyelee wants to do it." But One event had happened that changed my view to see the world entirely.
That was when I was 4th grade of elementary school the age of ten. At that time, I lived in my world and believed that I am the protagonist of the world. After finishing school, as usual I was walking the street to go to the playground. While I was walking with my friend Kim Myojin, who lived my next apartment, I was talking with her. I can't sure what the topic was. The thing I could remember is my friend, Myojin solved the problem that I was troubled too easily. Right after that moment, I surprised as I got electric shock. Because that was the first time I thougt someone could do better than me. After this shock, I look through my clever friend's eye thoroughly and slowly see the whole world that arounds me. Everything looked totally different than before, just as monk Onehyo realized the water he drank was skull water.
This was the event that whenever I recall, I feel really embarrassed and couldn't possibly know why I thought that way. After that event, I became the person who think others and less selfish. Fortunately, this weird event made me as a normal person and brought me back to earth.
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ReplyDeleteWhen I was a little girl, I could say that I was absolutely self-centered person. I loved myself too much so I used to call about my self in the third point person, such as "Hyelee is hungry." or "Hyelee wants to do it." But one event happened that changed my view to see the world entirely.
That was when I was the 4th grade of elementary school the age of ten. At that time, I lived in my world and believed that I am the protagonist of the world. After finishing school, I was walking the street to go to the playground as usual. While I was walking with my friend Kim Myojin, who lived my next apartment, I was talking with her. I can't sure what the topic was. The thing I could remember is my friend, Myojin solved the problem that I was troubled too easily. Right after that moment, I surprised as I got an electric shock. Because that was the first time I thougt someone could do better than me. After this shocking moment, I looked through my clever friend's eye thoroughly and slowly saw the whole world that arounds me. Everything looked totally different than before, just as monk Wonhyo realized the water he drank was skull water.
This was the event that whenever I recall, I feel really embarrassed and couldn't even know why I thought that way. After that event, I became the person who think others and less selfish. Fortunately, this weird event changed me into a normal person and brought me back to the earth.