Jitendra Kumar Gupta (#201081613) Page -145 (Wed 7-8)
When I passed 10th grade, my parents had different aspiration about my future. My mother wanted me to be an Engineer and my father wanted me to be a Doctor. So, I selected Mathematics for my mother and Biology for my father. I passed 12th grade and applied for engineering and medical entrance exam but I did not get what I wanted. Actually, I wanted to be a student of a renowned university. So, I changed my mind and applied for language courses in one of best university in India. I was selected in Korean Language Department and I did well there. Now, I am in South Korea as an exchange student. This is my success on which I feel proud all the time.
I became a part of Jawaharlal Nehru University in 2007.Before that my father had different attitude towards me. My father told me that you will do nothing in life and so I am not in a position to help you with money. He told that you have two options. Choose one of these. Either take care of your family business or get out my house for ever. I selected 2nd option. Because I felt that I can't do well in farming. Instead, I will do better in the field of education. So, I got out of my house and started tutoring Science, Maths, English and Sanskrit in other city. I started earning money for my livelihood and study. With this small amount of money, I started marching towards my new life and goal. In the mean time, I was selected in JNU. Thereafter, my father called me when he came to new about this news. At that time it was my turn, I said to my father, if you are going to help me now, only then I will be a part of your family. Otherwise, I can't be part of your for whole help. He promised me that he will help me anytime. Then, I shifted to Jawaharlal University and finally, I graduated this year from this university.
After completing my graduation, I applied for HUFS and PUFS. As a result, I was selected in both the university. In the PUFS, I was selected for six months and in HUFS, I was selected for one year. Moreover, I have been given govt. scholarship in PUFS and University scholarship in HUFS. But I preferred HUFS for two reasons. Firstly, HUFS provides scholarship for one year and secondly, it is in Seoul. As if now, I am in HUFS. In addition to that my parents feel proud whenever they think about me.
What I got from my life is that our society is result oriented. If someone is not doing well in his/her study or business, s/he is not getting respect only in society but in family too. Before getting busy in university life, I came to know all the worldly knowledge and I decided to act in accordance with that. As if now, I am happy with my decision and success that I got till date.
Otherwise,I can't be a part of your family for entire life(Otherwise, I can't be part of your for whole help).
ReplyDelete1. What I like about this piece of writing is your true story.
ReplyDelete2. Your main point seems to be how to get your life.
3. If someone is not doing well in his/her study or business, s/he is not getting respect only in society but in family too. It strikes me powerful. I totally agree with your thought.
4. Thereafter, my father called me when he came to new about this news. I think it would be good to replace word ‘new’.
5. The one change you could make that would make the biggest improvement in this piece of writing is length of your paragraph.