Jitendra Kumar Gupta (#201081613) Page -119 (Wed 7-8)
You know New Delhi and Seoul both are the capital of respective country like India and South Korea. But there are differences which differentiate both the capital cities at large. Each of these cities differs from each other in terms of telecommunication, transportation facilities, monuments and many more. When you compare both the metropolitan cities, they seem dramatically different places, but I love both more and less.
New Delhi is the capital of world's largest democracy called as India. Delhi is termed as mini world in terms of diversity of people, religions followed, culture, language spoken, heritage and modernity. Firstly, Delhi has highest density telephone density in India.This is due to the world class telecom services which are available at the cheapest rate in the world. Secondly, Delhi Metro Rail services provide one of the world's most modern transports to the passengers at the cheapest rate. Delhi also has distinction of world's largest fleet of road transport service running on Compressed Natural Gas (CNG).Thirdly, Delhi's monuments are very old and are not renovated yet.
Seoul is the capital and largest city of South Korea. Seoul is different of New Delhi in many ways. Firstly, telecom services are very expensive and are 3 times that of Delhi telecom services. Secondly, Seoul Metro is not as advanced as Delhi metro. Thirdly, Seoul heritages are rebuilt time and again to suit the tourist's interest.
In nut shell, both the countries are unique and different in its own ways. As if now, both are home for me. One thing I like about Seoul is that right and duties are parallel here unlike Delhi. Due to this reason, both the cities are different at large.
1.yes he metioned two capital cities Seoul and New Delhi
ReplyDelete2.yes, i can see clearly contrast paragraph,but sorry to say, comparison paragraph is too short.
3. yes but i can't find out his standard in three reasons before he mentioned 3 reasons, it would be better to write why you choose those reasons for comparisons
4. yes, but above mention, it would be better if he menetions more why he choose those reasons for comparisons
5.yes 6.yes but if you use more connectors like comparing to it could be more rich
1. Yes, he compares Seoul and New Delhi.
ReplyDelete2. Yes, the body paragraph focus on contrast.
3. Yes, he writed each main sentences clearly.
4. Yes
5. yes, for example, 'the cheapest rate in the world.'
6. Yes