Monday, November 22, 2010

Page 128 200601024 Noh Young Sun comparison contrast essay

 

                                                            Two Books that enriched My Soul

 

Do you have a favorite author whose soul is akin to yours? Finding books that are enchanting and inspiring and speak to you soul can be an exciting journey or better yet an epiphany that could lead you to some kind of enlightenment or open up your mind to a whole different world. l feel really ashamed to tell you that I am not an avid reader. Reading is definitely not on my to-do list whenever I have free time. So when pressed to choose my favorite author, it is quite easy to pick one, since I do not have that many. My all-time favorite author is Paulo Coelho. I have read several books of his and, to be quite frank, not liked all of them, but there are two novels that left me thinking about the meaning of life and the world around me. The Alchemist and Veronica decides to die are probably the two most read books of this best- selling novelist, which are also my all time favorites. The two are quite different stories, but I find them to have the same underlining theme.

 

     Every element of the two stories is quite different. On a side note, my English tutor back in high school gave me the book the Alchemist as a farewell gift during our last session and I bought the letter with my own money when I was a junior in college. The Alchemist is set in Andalusia and the other in Slovenia. The main character of this novel is an Andalusian shepherd boy named Santiago who sets out on a journey in a quest of a treasure hidden in the Pyramids. Whereas Veronika decides to die is a story about a 20something lady who seems to have everything that life could offer, yet fails to find meaning in life and decide to kill herself. The former is though and through about a journey of the boy from his home in Spain to North Africa. In contrast, the latter narrates the experiences and events that Veronika encounters in a mental asylum after her failed suicide attempt.

 

     The two books, although quite different in so many aspects, are both life-affirming novels. The way I see it, the theme of the stories are awareness of life. Throughout the stories, the author tries to teach us a life- lesson that each and every one of us has our own path in life that leads to our true self and should be aware of it every minute of our lives. This is what makes our ordinary, mundane life that is made up primarily of dull, set routine, anxieties and conformity reinforced by society worth a try. Living the life of others and trying to get your hands on something that is not there for you, means that you are dead in spirit, if not in body. The minute we realize that we have the most precious jewel in our own hands, within ourselves, we start to develop a genuine passion for living and discovering who we truly are instead of letting days just flow by, wearing a mask of somebody else that we are not.

 

   It is quite fascinating to discover the common theme buried in the two marvelous books that have quite different stories. On the one hand, I really liked the exotic settings of the Alchemist. On the other hand, I also enjoyed reading the vivid descriptions of the inside of the mental hospital in Veronika decides to die which is what made me enveloped in this novel from cover to cover. As I turned pages of these two amazing, moving and inspiring novels, I found myself slowing transforming into a new person, the one who was waiting within me to shine through me. I welcomed her with a warm smile.        

3 comments:

  1. 1. What I like about this piece of writing is her honesty toward two books.
    2. Your main point seems to be comparison and contrast between The Alchemist and Veronica decides to die.
    3. ‘I found myself slowing transforming into a new person, the one who was waiting within me to shine through me. I welcomed her with a warm smile.’ I like them because I could illuminate. 4. ‘Finding books that are enchanting and inspiring and speak to you soul can be an exciting journey or better yet an epiphany that could lead you to some kind of enlightenment or open up your mind to a whole different world.’ I think it would be a good idea to break into two sentences. It has lots of information in one sentence.
    5. Some words are not clear to me.

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  2. To- Noh Young Sun From- Jitendra Kumar Gupta
    1. What I like about this piece of writing is coherence among each paragraph.
    2. Your main point seems to be comparison and contrast between the two books namely Alchemist and Veronica to die.
    3. These particular words or lines struck me as powerful:
    Words or lines- I found myself slowing transforming into a new person, the one who was waiting within me to shine through me.
    I like them because such kinds of feelings usually come in the mind when a reader connects him/herself with the character of a novel like this.
    4. Some things aren’t clear to me. These lines or parts could be improved (meaning not clear, supporting points missing, order seems mixed up, writing not lively): nothing specially.
    5. The one change you could make that would make the biggest improvement in this piece of writing is the writer should concise “introduction paragraph”

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  3. Kim Si Eun 200900547November 24, 2010 at 1:54 PM

    1.what i like about this piece of writing is her detailed comparision beteween those two books.

    2,Your main point seems to be the comparision of those two books based on your feeling after reading

    3. 'I found myself slowing transforming into a new person, the one who was waiting within me to shine through me.'This sentence struck me because it's a poetical sentence.

    4.none

    5.The one chanfe you could make that would make the biggest improvement in your writing is to write another difference in your comparision, i think you only compare those two booke based on its story,it would be better if you write another differences like its style of writing

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