A film and a play
A film and a play have something in common and differences. I like two very much. These characteristics attract many spectators. And still these are famous. Maybe it will be more attractive by comparing and contrasting them.
They are composite art, and have story. Without story, it is hard to say 'film or play'. And they choose 'act' for express their story. So there are many actors. Film and play are not made by oneself. They are group work. Like film has scenario, play has script. And it is common that they are arts based on tempo.
However, whenever we see film, it isn't change because it is recorded. But play can be changed because it is influenced by situation. Unlike film meets spectators by screen, play meets spectators directly. And film can express time and place without limits, but it is difficult to express those things in play.
Maybe both have strength and weakness. And I think that they can survive because of this. If one of two can satisfy strengths of both, the other could be disappear. I can say that a film and a play have so many things interesting.
To Lee Su Jin From Ju Yeon Kim
ReplyDelete1. What I like about this piece of writing is that the writer talks about an interesting subject, a contrast and comparison between a film and a play.
2. Your main point seems to be that a film and a play have similarities and differences.
3. In the essay, the sentence that struck me most was 'If one of two can satisfy strengts of both, the other could be disappear'. I agree with the writer's point of view because I also think that the film and the play has its own strengts. If the strengths of these overlaped, then there wouldn't be any need to watch the film and the play respectively.
4. All things are clear.
5. In my opinion I think the writer wrote the similarities and difference between the two subjects well. However, I think it would be better if the writer add more details to each descriptions because it is a little bit short.
To Lee Sujin From Yu Hyelee(200902149 ELI)
ReplyDeleteAssignment 2010-11-21
1. What I like about this piece of writing is the subject you chose because I am very interested in both topics.
2. Your main point seems to similarities and differences between a play and a film.
3. “Maybe both have strength and weakness. And I think that they can survive because of this. If one of two can satisfy strengths of both, the other could be disappear.” struck me strongly because it was very fresh to me. With the first and second sentence, I didn’t understand very well but the last sentence made me understand and I think it’s quite interesting.
4. Some things aren’t clear to me; “Maybe it will be more attractive by comparing and contrasting them.” Because to me, it seems that you’re not so sure about your opinion and don’t have much confidence. I think you’d better be a bit more confident because it’s actually very interesting.